Today I will show you my live reactions to reading a story I wrote in 4th grade. In 4th grade I loved to write. I have an old notebook that has old stories in it (i cried when I started to read them) and they are so cringy but so nostalgic to read.
So prepare for cringe and tiny Kilikani writing! :D
All reactions will be written in BLACK!
Dear diary,
Happy birthday to me, Happy birthday to me, Happy birthday to meeeee, Happy birthday to me.
You don’t have to capitalize every H in happy birthday. Yay, I will be turning nine years old on march 24, 2016,as you know diary i skipped a grade so i am in 4th grade, and since i got you as a early birthday present let me tell you diary about myself,
Name, Zoey Keene
Favorite number, 24
Favorite letters, Z,K
Favorite food, PIZZA!!!
Favorite color, Purple!!!
Favorite toy, Stuffie ( Stuffed animal dog )
Favorite book series, Just add water
Welp, that's an old TV show
Favorite electronic, My iphone 6s
Best friend(s), Amanda Reil, Jessica Thomas
Favorite Tv show, Just add magic
By By For Now!!!!!
Zoey set down her journal.Ding Dong.
“Coming!” Called Zoey.Zoey ran down stairs and skipped to the front door.
*blank stare* please add spaces after periods..
“Hi Amanda.I am sooo glad you're here.” Said Zoey
“I know it feels like FOREVER since i’ve seen you.But it was only yesterday.Oh,and,HAPPY B-DAY!” Answered Amanda.
“He,he.Thanks Amanda.Come on in.Guess what kind of cake were having.”
No one laughs like 'he he'
“Chocolate? Vanilla? Red Velvet? Pudding?”
“No,no,no,and,no.Its vol,vol-”
“Vol,vol,vol,I’m stumped!”
“Volcano-”
“VOLCANO LAVA CAKE!!!”Squealed amanda.
“Yes!Come on let's go up to my room.”
“Ahh,ahh,ahh.You girls need to wait for the other guests.”Said Mrs.Keene.
“UGH” Groaned the two girls.They slumped to the door.Ding,Dong.
“Gramma Carie!!” Zoey quickly opened the door.
“Oh,my little chit chit’s all grown up.” Sighed gramma carrie.
“Gramma!”
Once all the guests arrived it was time for cake and presents.
“Cake…..mphagulp…..so..mphjli…..good…..mmmmmmmm!!” Said Jessica, Zoey’s other best friend.
“TIME FOR PRESENTS!!” Squealed Zoey.All the guests came into the living room.It was now time for presents.Zoey carefully unwrapped the first gift.
“A robot dog.Thanks Nona and papa.I've always wanted one.”
I wanted one of those in 4th grade!
“Your welcome.”
“Next present!” Zoey grabbed a present.She ripped off the wrapping paper wildly.
“Zoey,card first please.” Said Mrs.Keene
“But i already ripped off the paper!” Whined Zoey.Zoey’s mom gave her THE LOOK.
HAHA!! Mood!!
“Fine!” She grabbed the card and opened it.The card said:
Dear Zoey, I know you love acting. Your favorite show Just Add Magic has a new character. I put you in for auditions for the part. I hope you like the surprise. We,yes,me and you together, will be traveling to Hollywood! We will be there for 2 weeks. Then if you get the part you will practically live in hollywood!!
Wow.. yeah thats like.. very hard to get auditions.. yeah I don't think it works like that. ' Your FAVORITE gramma, Gramma Carrie
“You're Kidding!!!” Squealed Zoey.
“OOH,What is it!!” Said Amanda and Jessica.
“I am not telling. But i’ll be out of school for two weeks.” Zoey said suspiciously.
“Ohh.Suspicious.” Said Jessica.
“Everyone boarding flight 28 report to be boarded.”
That's.. not exactly what they say! The airport was buzzing with busy people.Zoey and Gramma Carrie were waiting to be boarded.
“You know what we can do while we wait?”
“What Gramma Carrie.”
“I Spy.”
“Good idea.Ok,I spy with my little eye,Something,red.”
“That person's red jacket?”
What person?!
“No.”
“Um,-”
“Everyone boarding flight 29 please report to gate 3 to be boarded.”
You would already be at your gate... ugghhh.
“Thats us!!” Squealed Zoey.They swiveled through the crowd of people.It was as if the airport was a bee hive with bees buzzing around everywhere.The girls went through secerity and boarded the plane.They picked a seat next to the wing of the plane.
You don't pICK a seat!! You are assigned a seat. '
“Cause baby now we got bad blood.You know we used to have mad love.So take a look what you’ve done.Cause baby now we got bad blood,Hey!” Sang Zoey.Zoey had her phone hooked to a speaker and was singing along.They had arrived at their hotel and were settling in.
I remmeber that song!!! :D
“Zoey,come on,you have a very big day tomorrow.It’s time for bed.”
“But gramma carrie.”
“You have auditions tomorrow.”
“Fine.” Zoey scurried to the bathroom and got ready for bed.She brushed her teeth,went to the bathroom,and washed her face.
“Good night my little chit chit.”
“Good night my little chit chit.” Zoey mimicked.
*gasps* how rude! I would never say that to my grandma!
“Gramma,I AM NOT A LITTLE GIRL.” “Good night,Zoey.” Zoey climbed into bed and snuggled deep under the covers off one of the queen sized beds.ZZZZZZZZZ
that's nice If Zoey got the part Zoey would be living in a house that her gramma would pay for,of course she wouldn't live alone.Someone different every time zoey needed to be in hollywood would come with her.Anyway,it was now morning and the audition day had started.
It's morning now?
“Rise and shine,Zoey,it's audition day!” Zoey climbed out of bed and stretched.
“I’m nervous.” She said.
“Zoey,you’ll be fine.You love preforming and you’ve been in three plays at school.” Answered Gramma Carrie.
“I know,i know.It's just,well,what IF I get the part?”
“Well,then you’ll be living your dream.”
“Ok,I’ll try.”
“Zoey Keene,your turn to audition.” Said Gramma Carrie.Zoey silently stood up and walked to the audition room.
“Hello,I’m Mrs.Jared.And what's your name?”
“My name is Zoey and I love to perform.”
“Nice,nice.So Zoey i'd like you to say a couple lines from the script.”
“Ok, Mrs.Jared.Here I go, ‘Um, a,hi.’ ‘Let's get cooking’.” Started Zoey.
I really should have done research first...
After auditions Gramma Carrie and Zoey went to McDonalds to have lunch.
“One,six piece,chicken Mcnugget happy meal. Two soft drinks,one chicken wrap, and an order of large fries, please.” Ordered Gramma Carrie.
“Zoey, you can go pick a seat. I will be back with our food.”
“Ok.” Said Zoey.She skipped away and found a nice clean booth and sat down.She pulled out her journal.
Dear Diary, I am so excited. I want to cherish this moment. And now we are at McD’s. I am extremely happy. I really hope i g-
RING, RING! Zoey pulled her phone from her pocket.
“Hello?- OH,- hi,--wha, wha, what!!-- Are you lying?--you aren't lying?--OMG!! Thank you!! Yes i will tell my family-- bye-” Gramma Carrie walked over to the table and sat down.
“Who was that?” She asked.
“The studio. Guess what?” Said Zoey
“Hmm, you have to eat hamburger soup with soy sauce.”
“Gramma Carrie!”
“I know, well, let's say you GOT THE PART.”
“Yes! Can you believe it?!” Exclaimed Zoey. They talked and ate their delicious meal. Zoey’s life was going to be a whole lot better. But for now she was going to enjoy her lunch.
Book, 2, coming soon!!!!!
Thanks for reading this installment of I Sought The Stories! Feel free to owl me if you have any questions or writing prompts for future posts!
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